Правильно ли составлены фразы в этом тексте? Many people will feel as I do, that the...

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Правильно ли составлены фразы в этом тексте?

Many people will feel as I do, that the world is a poorer place without him. Our sincere condolences to family and close friends. Our thoughts and prayers are with you during this sad time.

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Many people will feel that the world is much more poorer without him. So will I.  Our sincere condolences to family and close friends. Our thoughts and prayers are with you during this sad time.