Ребята,очень прошу!!Кто знает английский язык помогите проверить пожалуйста правильность...

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Ребята,очень прошу!!Кто знает английский язык помогите проверить пожалуйста правильность текста (переведенного с русского-англ).Исправьте пожалуйста где и что не верно)Тект про биографию Мусы Джалиля.
In 1941 he was drafted into the Red Army. In the rank of senior political leader fought at Leningrad and Volkhov Fronts, was a correspondent for the newspaper "Courage."
June 26, 1942 in Luban offensive operation near the village of Musa Jalil Meat Bohr was seriously wounded in the chest and fell into plen.Dlya order to be able to continue to participate in the fight against the enemy, Jalil joined the Germans created a legion of "Idel-Ural» Gmina Jedlińsk near Radom (Poland), which was formed legion "Idel-Ural", Musa organized an underground group among foreign players and arranged shoots prisoners of war
Using the fact that he was instructed to conduct cultural and educational work, Jalil, driving around the camp for prisoners of war, conspiracy established under the guise of communication and selection of amateur actors to set up a legion Choir recruiting new members of the underground organization. He was involved with the underground organization called "Berlin Committee of the CPSU (b)", headed by NS Bushmanov.
Formed the first 825 Battalion of the Legion "Idel-Ural", aimed to Vitebsk, revolted February 21, 1943, during which the part of the soldiers (about 500-600 people.) Left the location of parts and with arms joined the Belarusian partisans . The personnel of the remaining six battalions of the Legion, when you try to use them in combat, often to the side of the Red Army and the guerrillas.
In August 1943, the Gestapo arrested Jalil and most members of his underground group a few days before the uprising prisoners is carefully prepared. For participation in the underground organization Musa Jalil was executed on the guillotine August 25, 1944 in Ploetzensee in Berlin.


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второй абзац Первое слово второго предложение ...Dlya?

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Ну я не такой профи по английскому языку, но ошибок я не нашел.)

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