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Ребятки,знатоки английского,проверьте на правильность текстик...
A year, for many different occasions, each has its own characteristics and traditions. I love March 8, because everything is prepared interesting crafts mothers, may 9, because we have the whole family go to the parade, Easter, because my mom paint the eggs and go to visit my grandmother has delicious cakes and other treats. But most of all I love my birthday!
Birthday all of you pay a lot of attention and give gifts. You can invite a lot of friends and a whole day to play. For my birthday my mom bakes cake for me, I blow candles on the cake and make fondest wish. If not to tell anyone that he made a wish, the wish will come true. Because the day of birth for each person - it's a magical day!

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Each year has different occasions. Each occasion has its own characteristics and traditions. I like March 8 because it is interesting. I like May 9 because our family goes to the parade to celebrate Easter; because my mum paints eggs and visits my grandmother who has delicious cakes and otehr treats. But most of all I like my birthday!
I like my birthday because this day all people pay much attention to you and give presents. I invite a lot of friends and we play for all day. For my birthday my mum bakes a cake for me, I blow candles on the cake and make fondest wish. If you don't tell anyone what the wish was, it will come true, because birthday is a magical day!