Проверьте пожалуйста правильность написания текста! Day my brother. He gets up at seven...

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Проверьте пожалуйста правильность написания текста! Day my brother. He gets up at seven o'clock. then he puts on clothes and has breakfast. After breakfast he goes to kindergarten at eight o'clock. He usually eleven o'clock at kindergarten. He comes home at seven o'clock. Then he has dinner. He eats chicken and potatoes. In the evening he watches TV. He goes to bed at nine o'clock

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My brother's day. My brother usually gets up at seven  o'clock.Then he does his morning exercise, puts his clothes  on and has breakfast. After breakfast at about 8 a.m. he goes to the kindergarten. In the kindergarten, other children and he always play different interesting games, listen fairy-tales, sing, dance and make fun) My brother likes to spend his time in the kindergarten. At 7 p.m my brother comes home. When everybody of our family  are at home we have supper,My little brother likes to eat chicken and potatoes.In the evening he watches TV and cartoons. At 9 p.m he goes to bed

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Почему в начале brother's, а где At 7 p.m my brother comes home brother.

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