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I would like to tell you about a popular Russian holiday.
New Year is very popular all over the world. It is my favorite holiday.
Usually the New Year prepared in advance.
Throughout December the adults prepare all gifts.
It is necessary to put a beautiful tree.
Children with their parents decorate the Christmas tree.
This process is a lot of fun.
Even a cat plays Christmas decorations.
Garlands of Christmas tree lights mysterious shimmer.
And each toy has its own separate history.
Indeed, in Russia it is accepted to keep New Year's toys.
Many toys were even in childhood moms and dads!
And many of the grandmothers preserved childhood toys!
And every toy is interesting to look at.
I have this special day.
After all, I was born in the New Year!
Thank you for listening. My story is over.

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Новый Год очень популярен во всем мире.
Это и мой любимый праздник.
Обычно к Новому году готовятся заранее.
Весь декабрь взрослые готовят всем подарки.
Надо поставить красавицу елку.
Дети вместе с родителями украшают елку .
Этот процесс доставляет много удовольствия.
Даже кошка играет елочными украшениями.
Гирлянды от елки переливаются загадочными огоньками.
А у каждой игрушки есть своя отдельная история.
Ведь в России принято хранить новогодние игрушки.
И многие игрушки были даже в детстве мам и пап!
И многие сохранили игрушки из детства бабушек!
И каждую игрушку интересно разглядывать.
У меня этот день особенный.
Ведь я родилась в Новый год!

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I would like to tell you about a holiday that is very popular in Russia.
New Year is very popular all over the world. It is my favorite holiday.
People usually prepare for the New Year beforehand.
All December the adults prepare their presents.
It is necessary to set up a beautiful fir-tree.
Children with their parents decorate a Christmas tree.
This process is a lot of fun.
Even my cat plays with Christmas decorations.
Garlands of Christmas tree lights shimmer mysteriously.
And every toy has its own history.
Indeed, it is a tradition in Russia to keep New Year's toys.
Many toys were even in moms` and dads` childhood!
And many grandmothers preserved their childhood toys!
And every toy is interesting to look at.
This day is special for me,
After all, I was born on the New Year` day! 
Thank you for listening. My story is over.