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My favorite character is Vasilisa from a book "Chasodei". She is very tall with red hair and she has a red and black wings. After her 14 birthdays, her father took daughter to his home planet, Eflara. She began to learn to manage a time there. And she started to get. At the end of the history, Vasilisa and Fesh became the masters of time.